Well done Callum - this is a HUGE improvement on your last piece of work and I can tell that you've put a lot of effort into it.
The only suggestions that I can make for how you could improve are: - Be more adventurous with editing images in photoshop to achieve an 'edgier' look - Use more TERMINOLOGY to gain more marks for your research and evalution.
Well done Callum - this is a HUGE improvement on your last piece of work and I can tell that you've put a lot of effort into it.
ReplyDeleteThe only suggestions that I can make for how you could improve are:
- Be more adventurous with editing images in photoshop to achieve an 'edgier' look
- Use more TERMINOLOGY to gain more marks for your research and evalution.
Keep up the good work :-)